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My Fan-Fic 7

Post by Mau on Tue May 06, 2008 12:44 pm

Here's Chapter 7!!!

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Spoiler:
The Childhood Friend: 7

A Kitsune and Sasuke Fan Fiction
(Kitsune is a made up character by me)

"Winter Festival"






~Kitsune's Apartment~

Kitsune is opening her apartment door. She grinned and thought, "I wonder what will happen tomorrow."


~Morning 7:00, Konoha Ninja School~

The class was copying the notes on the board. Kitsune was still sitting on Naruto's seat, due to the fact
that Iruuka forbid the students to transfer seats. (Aww how sad)

Naruto, who is still on Kitsune's seat, turned to Kitsune, who was copying notes. He stared at her and
thought, "Can she really see with that blindfold on? Amazing." Then he turned to Sasuke, who is starring at Kitsune.
"Oye! Sasuke." Naruto whispered. Sasuke didn't reply. "Oye! Sa-su-ke!" Naruto whispered a little louder, waving his
hand infront of Sasuke's face. Now Naruto was annoyed. "SASUKE BAKA!!!" Naruto shouted slapping Sasuke's face.

"WHAT THE HELL?!?" Sasuke shouted, rubbing his cheek. "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?!?" Sasuke asked, pissed. Naruto crossed
his arms, "You weren't paying attention in class, and instead..." Naruto paused for a moment and whispered to Sasuke,
"...you are starring at Tachikawa-chan." "BAKA!" Sasuke exploded and was about to punch Naruto. Suddenly, Iruuka appeared
out of the blue, and stopped Sasuke's fist. "Sasuke, Naruto, out." Iruuka said flatyly, his eyes closed. Sasuke cringed,
released his fist from Iruuka's hand, and went out of the classroom. Naruto made an annoyed face and said, "Whatever!"
He went out of the classroom his hands behind his head. Kitsune wondered why they both fought.


~After class, outside the campus~

Kitsune and Sayuri is sitting on a rock bench. Sayuri is reading a book, and Kistune was just sitting there.


"Sayuri-chan? What book is that?" Kistune asked out of curiosity. "Oh this? Gaara-senpai gave it to me." Sayuri replied,
slightyly blushing. "Oh." Kitsune replied back and stayed quiet (MAN! These two are boring!). "Oh yeah! Speaking of Gaara-senpai,
"here." Sayuri showed two golden tickets (Ha! This reminbs me of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory). "Tickets for the
Winter Festival tomorrow." Sayuri handed Kitsune both tickets. "Invite Sasuke too." Sayuri grinned. There was a moment of
silence until Sayuri said, "Gaara-senpai told me something about those tickets. What was that again?"

~Sayuri Flashback~

Sayuri and Gaara was at the ticket shop. Gaara was buying tickets for the Winter Festival. Sayuri tugged on Gaara's sleeve,
"Gaara-senpai, can you buy 2 extra tickets?" "What for?" Gaara asked. "I wanted to invite Tachikawa-san and Sasuke."
Sayuri replied, doing the pointer to pointer hande gesture. Gaara stared for a while and nodded. He gave Sayuri three tickets.
"Tell Tachikawa and Sasuke that if they enter the festival with these tickets, everything is free." Gaara informed Sayuri. "Really? Awesome!"

~end of flashback~

Sayuri looked at Kitsune. "Gaara-senpai said: If you enter the festival with this ticket, everything's free." Sayuri said copying
Gaara's acccent and facial expression. "Yeah that's what he said." Sayuri smiled at Kitsune while blinking. Kitsune twitched, and took
the two tickets from Sayuri. "Oohkey." Kitsune said still weirded out. "Well then, I have to go now!" Sayuri said closing her book.
She stood up and waved. Kitsune waved back until Sayuri's figure was gone.

Minutes later, Sasuke came by the stone bench. Sasuke saw Kitsune and sat beside her on the bench a little too far. Kitsune sensed
Sasuke sit down. "Hey..." Kitsune started conversation. Sasuke glanced at her and said nothing. It was a moment of silence until,
"Walk you home?" Sasuke asked. Kitsune nodded smiling.


~Streets~

Kitsune and Sasuke were walking silently in the streets. No one said a word. Naruto saw them walking and approached Kitsune and pushed
Sasuke aside. "Tachikawa-chan! Are you going to the Winter Festival? Would you like to come with me? I got us tickets!" Naruto said joyfully.
Kitsune made a bleak smile. "Actually..." Kitsune said while getting something from her pocket, "I was gonna give this to Sasuke." Sasuke
stood up as Kitsune handed him the gold ticket. "Gomen, Naruto-kun." Kitsune apologized. Naruto made and annoyed face and said, "Fine!
I'll ask Sakura-chan to come with me then!" Naruto stomped away.

Kitsune and Sasuke watched Naruto silently until Kitsune said, "Was he trying to--" Kitsune's sentence was cut by Sasuke, "Yeah he was."
They both chuckled and continued to Kitsune's apartment. They reached her door step. Kitsune was going to open the door when Sasuke said,
"By the way, what's this?" "Oh, Sayuri gave me two tickets for the Winter Festival. I wanted to invite you so, yeah." Kitsune replied.
"That ticket's special. When you enter the festival with that, everything's free." I see." Sasuke nodded. Kitsune entered the apartment and
Sasuke walked home.


~Day of the Winter Festival~

8:00 am, Kitsune just woke up. She was wearing her yellow pajamas with pink bunnies on it. She went down staris to prepare breakfast.
SHe made bacon and eggs (yummeh!!!). So she was eating her breakfast when the doorbell rang.

She opened the door and saw Sayuri with Gaara. "Sayuri-chan! It's early in the morning!" Kitsune said scratching her head. Kitsune saw Gaara
"Ohayo, Kazekage-sama." Kitsune greeted Gaara. "Arigato Kitsune-chan." Gaara thanked Kitsune with a bored voice. " Kitsune-chan, we're here
to take you Yukata shopping!" Sayuri joyfully announced. "I haven't taken a bath yet." Kitsune replied. "Well hurry up! We'll wait here." Sayuri
replied back grabbing Gaara's arm, which made the Kazekage blush. "Hai! Just wait here then." Kitsune said running to her room."


--3 minutes later--

Kitsune opened the door, "Hai! Let's go Sayuri-chan!" "EH?" Kitsune saw Sayuri on Gaara's back sleeping. "Sayuri-chan, Tachikawa's back." Gaara informed
Sayuri." Sayuri wakes up, "What took you so long Tachikawa-san? Yosh! Let's go Gaara-senpai! Yip yip!" "Well then can I put you down now Sayuri-chan?"
Gaara asked since Sayuri is still on his back. " No!! I want to stay here! Carry me until we get to the store." Sayuri commended Gaara with a face like this
-->(>_<). "Hai..." Gaara agreed with a bored voice. Kitsune chuckles a little. Seeing Gaara being bossed around by Sayuri is somewhat funny.

-Winter Festival-

6:00 pm the festival started. There were rides, games and food everywhere. Kitsune arrived at their meeting place near the feris-wheel. Sasuke then arrives.
Kitsune waved at him. They both waited for Sayuri and Gaara to arrive. Both finally came. "Tachikawa-chan! You look really good in your yukata!"
Sayuri complemented her best friend. "Arigatoh Sayuri-chan." Kitsune bowed. "Me and Gaara-senpai will be splitting with you guys." Sayuri informed Sasuke
and Kitsune while grabbing Gaara's arm. "Let's go Gaara-senpai!" Sayuri pulled Gaara while giggling.

Kitsune and Sasuke we're left alone. Kitsune couldn't say a thing, as well as Sasuke. It was a very awkward moment. Kitsune built up her courage and said,
"Sasuke-kun, do you want to ride the feris-wheel?" "Sure." Sasuke shrugged and grabbed Kitsune's hand. This made Kitsune slightly blush.

They enter one of the cart things of the feris-wheel (sorry I don't know what it's called XP). The feris-wheel ride started. It was slow and calm.
Kitsune was looking out the window.Few minutes later, "Kitsune-chan, what do you think about Naruto?" Sasuke asked looking down.
"Naruto? He has a lot of great qualities!Too many to metntion." Kitsune replied not taking her eyes of the window. "You know, there's a lot of guys out
there who's better than Naruto." Sasuke said trying not to sound jealous. "I know." Kitsune turned to Sasuke with a smile on her face. Sasuke just stared
at Kitsune's smiling glossy lips. He suddenly grabs Kitsune by her wrist and slowly move his face close to hers. He couldn't stop himself. They're lips were
6 centimeter's apart when, "OKAY! RIDES OVER!!!" the man who was running the feris-wheel opened the door of the cart. Sasuke then snapped out of it and
let go of Kitsune's wrist. Kitsune exited the cart followed by Sasuke.

After the feris-wheel, Sasuke and Kitsune went to buy food, and played games the whole night. Sasuke even caught a gold fish a gave it to Kitsune.

It was 10:00. It was time for them to go home so they went back to their meeting place, the feris-wheel.

And again both of them were waiting for Gaara and Sayuri. They see Gaara carriying Sayuri bridal style. Sayuri seems to be acting weirdly in Gaara's arms.
She was wiggling and laughing. "Uhh Kazekage-sama? What happened to Sayuri-chan?" Kitsune asked. "She drank to much Sake, and now she's drunk." Gaara
replied sweat dropped. Sasuke and Kitsune sweat dropped as well. "Hello Tachikawa-chan! *hiccup* Gaara-senpai is so warm! I love him-chu! *hiccup*" Sayuri
kissed Gaara on the lips. Gaara's eyes were like (O_O). "EH!?!?!?!?!" Kitsune screamed surprised. Sasuke was just sweat dropping with a weird smile.
"Sa-Sayuri-chan?" Gaara said blushing like crazeh!!! "Just shut up an take me home Gaara." Sayuri ordered Gaara. "I hate it when she get's drunk." Gaara
mumbled. "Have a safe trip!" Kitsune said waving. "Let's go Tachikawa-chan. I'll walk you home." Sasuke said grabbing Kitsune's hand with a smirk.

They we're walking past the park. Kitsune stopped on her tracks. "Sasuke-kun?" "Hai?" Sasuke turned to look at Kitsune. "Today was fun." Kitsune smiled.
Sasuke smirked and said, "Yeah...". Then it suddenly started to snow. Both Kitsune and Sasuke looked up. Kitsune walked to Sasuke grabbed his arm, and
rested her head on his arm. Sasuke just smiled and they both continued on walking.
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Post by admin on Tue May 06, 2008 5:21 pm

Hey! I never read this chapter!! but I knew u were still crazy about him! (the time we were chatting!)

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Re: My Fan-Fic 7

Post by Mau on Tue May 06, 2008 6:55 pm

I am not crazy about Sasuke!!! Mad

I like Tobi now!!! TOOOOOOOBIIIIIIIII!!!!!!! Mad
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Post by admin on Wed May 07, 2008 5:09 pm

who's tobi?
the akatsuki guy right?
he's ooglee!

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Re: My Fan-Fic 7

Post by lotusflower on Tue May 20, 2008 7:21 pm

Yeah...Tobi's lame...
Anyways...Your deadline for the next chapter on is on June 4. I'd like too see it by then...okay, Sabe. LOL
Don't forget
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Post by admin on Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:24 pm

are you going to continue writing? I can't wait for the next chapter.. lol... I'm bored..

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Post by !iNimiel on Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:32 pm

where is the next chapter??? Aaaw common.. don't stop writing!!!
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