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Post by Mau on Tue May 06, 2008 12:25 pm

Here's Chapter 1!!!

Comment please!!!

Spoiler:
The Childhood Friend: 1

Kitsune and Sasuke Fan Fiction
(Kitsune is a made up character by me)

"The Deal With Childhood Friend's Brother"



Somewhere in an average home, there lived a girl named Tachikawa, Kitsune. Kitsune has a sick grandfather. Not that sick though. He can still do things on his own. Almost all of Kitsune's family members died because of a fire. Only she and her grandfather survived the fire.

---In the house---

A mysterious voice speaks. It was a male voice. " Remember the deal Kitsune...If you ever tell him that you're his childhood friend, heh, you know what'll happen to your grandfather.". "Yes, I won't forget..." Kitsune replies, kisses her grandfather on the forehead, " Don't worry grandpa, I'll come back for you." Kitsune said teary eyed. Kitsune leaves the house with her grandfather left alone with the mysterious man.

---Next scene---

Kitsune jumps from tree to tree.

Kitsune is already a genin of the Star Village. But Kitsune has to go to Konoha to be a Konoha Ninja. And there's another reason. Kitsune has a childhood friend who's studying in the Konoha Ninja School and she wants to be with him.

But she made a deal with her childhood friend's brother, that she can't tell her childhood friend that she is his chilhood friend. If she did, her grandfather will be killed. Since she loved her grandfather so much, she accepts the deal. Her childhood friend's brother made the deal because Kitsune was the only closest person that his younger brother has left. He doesn't want his younger brother to know for he wants his brother to stay misserable.

So Kitsune finaly arrived in Konoha. Kitsune speaks, "Konoha...I want to be a Konoha Ninja...for my grandpa." Kitsune smiles for the other reason, her childhood friend, "I can't wait to see you again... Uchiha, Sasuke-kun! ". She shouts his name out loud in an excited way.
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Re: My Fan-Fic

Post by admin on Tue May 06, 2008 5:05 pm

lol.. I think this should be in the literature page lol!
and you should continue writing Razz
to gain more posts ~~~

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Re: My Fan-Fic

Post by onosaka_kinji on Tue May 20, 2008 8:24 pm

I think the chapter's pretty short...
Good start-up tho...
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Re: My Fan-Fic

Post by admin on Tue May 20, 2008 8:27 pm

yah.. he's got a point.. Neutral

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